Wow BABE!! i love it so much! is this how your feeling? B-E-A-UTIFUL! i love you chels!
XOXOXO
Kamille

This poem was relli relli good! your an excellent writter 5/5

I liked the lines "To strong to lose,
To weak to win.
are these the feelings that fill us within?"
Creative. 4. If you want you can read a few of mine but that's up to you. If you do I recomend one of evil little murder poems. ^_^ You'll find the best in my favorites.