I believe there are to many I's and We's in this poem.

"Cherri.
I got to mad easily at you,
It made you sad you and you felt bad
Im sorry it was my fault. I know"

see what i mean. in those four verses there are 3 I's (I'ms included) and two you's.

try and write with less of them and your poetry will reach higher levels.

~Terra

Thanks For Being There For Me In The Tough Times, I will always Love you like a sister

Cherri,
Your Sister By Friendship

Thanks For Being There For Me In The Tough Times, I will always Love you like a sister

Cherri,
Your Sister By Friendship