Wow.amamzing. I love the intensity and the beat and the rhyme./ keep it up, cant wait to read more.

Lissa**

For a short poem.. its awesome!@!!! u cn feel the emtion.. realli nicepoem xoxox.. keep up the great work..

Great work =) keep it up ur poems are just so amazing... luv jami xxx

Its short, but I love how you use your words. I hope you write a lot more, cause i cant wait! Keep up the good work ;) xoxox

Its sad but true from the heart i love the woy all your poems just fit together you have so much talent im jelous....xoxoxoxo

Awwwww i know how you feel check out my bros poems (somene cliche)

-Devin

OHHH MYYYY GODDD!! you poor child no one should have to suffer like you do.