Since it's one of those poems that probably doesn't give the meaning straight out, I took my own meaning from it.

I liked how you described the poem but then made it seem like you were having a conversation with someone unseen but at the same time someone who feels like a real person.

Maggots emerge as blue bottles
and ewes birth lambs, again.

One of my favorite parts involves the ewes and lambs. Again, for my own reason, but it was such a different description then I'm used to.

One of your better poems, which is not saying much because all your poems are excellent, this just has something a little extra.

Wow, so deep for me to understand it well,lol.
very talented and written so nicley

I gave it a 5/5, but i honestly didn't get the whole metaphor... but i still gave it a 5/5 b/c i just think my brain isn't working tonight, and it still seemed awesome lol... nice job

Hmm...this was very different from the things you normally hear. I'm not suer I got the metaphorical meaning behind it, but it was rather well written nonetheless.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Although i could not fully understand I got were this is going! this is amazing and im going to read more