Comments : Stay With Me

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Woweee-- I can really relate to this poem, like word by word. And usually I don't find many poems on here anymore that have how I'm feeling in them..

    So yeah. I really liked this one. Loved it! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Wonderful job expressing the emotions in this work! This is my favorite part:
    They're pushing me away,
    And I'm pushing back.
    Trying to stay strong,
    But it's so hard.
    Such a true statement... Keep up the great writing! xo =D

    xxEvilAngelxx