Wow thats deep you have a unique talent i dont really like sad poems but i always love yours 5/5

Hey this poem is awesome... you have a kick ass talent fo writing poems!
and tanx for reading and commenting on my poem.
~*~ jessie ~*~

Wow thats reallt sad it brought a tear.... great poem

WOW! very powerful...i love this.

I'm not sure I like this one as much. The lines are a bit bulky and the flow a bit rocky. Keep working :]

"this pain cant be contained like this any more,
her tears are bleeding, her heart is tore,"

That was so so sad.. It's so horrible that there are so many people who meet this fate...
5/5
*Gem*

Aaay it wa sad. my dear you have great tlanet. your poems are so good. i loved your writing styled. you alwasy put stron emotions in your poems. take care i will give you must 5/5

God, this is so sad. i love it. its amazing. 5/5