Comments : Show me your smile ...

  • 17 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    Good job! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another sweet poem, you are great in writting, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by susan

    Good one 3/4...and thanks for stopping by my page. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Hazel

    I love it!!! keep up the good work!! (",)

  • 17 years ago

    by cut from the [scene]

    I love this one. It's made me want to write a poem like that too. :]

    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Good poem, but I felt like there wasn't much of a flow. 5/5