Oh, i like this one, too! you're really good at these lanturnes! short but sweet, very cool

You are very good at these lanturnes, as sibyllene said, this one should be understood by parnts who often sing their children to sleep. I love it. Denise

You are very good at these lanturnes, as sibyllene said, this one should be understood by parnts who often sing their children to sleep. I love it. Denise

I love the short and sweet styles, although I think it's the words and imagery created that give it that child-like feel, which goes really good with this poem. Another great job!