Hey, what a beautiful poem! But it could use a little work. It flows well, but perhaps you might want to seperate it into stanzas. Although its not neccissary. Another thing is that you might want to take a look at some gramatical mistakes at the bottom of your poem. like this:
"feel my hand i his," and
" i tase hi sweet kiss"
other than that, i think its an amazing poem. and its really beautiful. :) xxx