Oh, a nice poem but a very sad one, u wrote it so nicely, the flow is great.
great job 5/5

I can feel the emotion youve pored into this poem, good jod i found the flow a bit off try and match the amount of sylables in lines but good job xxALLYxx

This was a sad poem, but it was good to learn it wasn't based on a true story. Venting through poetry is always good, and getting all your emotions out. You did a really good job controlling those emotions and not ranting. Good stuff.

That was a good poem! loved it, it flowed well and the way you used your words was good!

Keep it up!

This was sad, but good... very good write... keep it up

You don't seem to have flow to your poems, but they tell such stories.. I used to feel like this a lot, I can relate so well. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Great poem, Deary. Venting can turn into great writing! w00p, w00p!!!
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So meany poeple think they no others your so right they just dont no poeple the way thet think they do its good poem keep up the good work
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*This is an awesome poem! keep it up! if you get a chance, check out my new one!*

Wow.... really well writen... i can relate.. please check sum of mine and comment

I know exactly what you're saying, I sometimes feel the same way.