That was so sad!! But it was really beautifully written, i loved it! The rhyming worked very well as well.Great work!
"...He didn't know where to
He just had to get away
He only knew one thing ;
Without her - alive he couldn't stay .."
^^This was my favourite stanza, it was such a heartbreaking ending! But i really liked it!Keep writing...

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

I love it!! Absolutely love it. Actually, I love all your poems =] They are written so good. This is such a heartbreaking poem and I love it all. Anyways, I'll shut up now and give you 5/5
Always Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

Wow that is one of the best things i have ever read!
Well done you are really talented! x

It was sad but luv3d it