Try to capitalise your I's.

It was a pretty sad poem, but it flowed pretty good and the rhyming didn't seem forced either. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

P.S. Thanks for the comment. =)

This poem is very good and its well written! keep up the awsum work because your a good writter! 5/5

Very good sad but good

Good rhymings scheme, but I really like the content. I feel that way so often.

;( sad sad poem
If i needed to say more I would.
Well I do.
lol.
I dont think this is your best but i still think its good
~Emah

Wow. like i said you words are realy powerful. youre amazing