Wow... thats really deap. i liked it heaps. great job.

Wow this was really good. the flow was pretty consistent. it's also good because it deals on a real life problem.

I use to have an eating disorder. But it wasn't a friend that was saying stuff.
But anyway,
I loved it! Another great one.
LOVEYOUTHEMOSTEST!
Love,
..::Heather x Emo With Megan::..

Not too bad of a poem... A bit cliche and you didn't tend to use very big or describing words.. And there wasn't too much flow either.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

5/5, amazing hun. If you ever need to talk (I'm ana) then feel free to im me on msn at Brit73gymnast@hotmail.com