It's really diff...i like it alot...it has a nice flow...ur a good writer

I liked it keep it up!! and thank you for you comments on mine

This is a very good poem. I enjoyed it. Keep up all the awesome work.

I love the flow of your poem it's different and i love that great use of words.and thanks for your comment on mine that made my day thank you so much.i really like your poems there amazing
aunabeth:D

Great I love it! The srtucture and everything is great!! Keep it up! :)