Ooh, wow. I love dancing, so the title to this poem really dragged me in. And it was a lovely poem too! Very nicely done. =) 5/5

Natalie``

Ooooooooo I liked that, the structure and words used mirror the gracefulness of the dancer. Well done

I really liked this poem it was good keep it up and keep writing and im sure ill keep reading :):):)

plz vote some of my poems plz and giv me some feedback thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)

Awww that was soo cute..it was lovely i loved it..your description and imagery was perfect...i was a dancer when i was younger and it took me back to those days in my head...i loved it! 5/5

Awh. I like this one. I love dancers and I think this poem was very nice. I liked the idea of it. I thought it flowed rather well too. I give it a five. Keep up the work. :]

This was pretty good.. it was a little bit bland, but i liked the metaphors and descriptions.. the flow was pretty good too.. and the emotion was clear.. in the last line you wrote "she" twice.. nice job! 5/5