Comments : When I'm Gone

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    Thi poem was awsome....i havent read one of your forever....and it was great as always...sad but great...i always loved your poems

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Beautifully written...i love it!!!!

    xoxo becca

  • 16 years ago

    by AngelWithTheBrokenWings

    Nicely written...i like it

    xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So sorrowful and so easy to read..you made a masterpiece with that
    Keep it up
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    THIS IS AN AMAZING POEM. It was so sad and yet so powerful. The flow was wonderful and the rhyming was great. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    That was very sad and depressing, yet had a sweet, sencere since about it. Very nice. 5/5

    -Liz-

  • 16 years ago

    by kIROS DELA VEGA

    Another good masterpiece dude... 5/5 for your poem

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Omg. again its amzing love <333
    wow. exactly how i feel.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Woooooooooow

  • 15 years ago

    by expressivechild

    Such a heartbreaking poem yet written in such a way that people who feel the same can totally relate. You conveyed the feelings of hopelessness and despair with such intense emotions!

  • 14 years ago

    by sarah

    You rlly spoke put to me and my life aint great anyway but seeing im not alone rlly helps thankyou for helping me keep strong

  • 14 years ago

    by tiff

    Life is hard and it sounds like you know how 2 channel it in2 your poems.not every1 is able 2 do that and you seems very talented.