Very good! i liked it! :) i think you should keep going!!!

~~Spanish367

Great poem

Oooh. wow. This was awesome! Loved it how it started out like a story at the start and then into diary entries. Excellent job!

Natalie``

Wow, nice!

The start was great and i liked how you made it into a diary in the middle...the ending wants me to keep on reading..very nice piece of work!
Keep Writing
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
A.Pathetic.Mistake