That was so good! keep going! don't stop! i love how this is written! it keeps ya wanting to know more and more! i hope you do write part three!!!

~~Spanish367

What a great poem, cant wait for part 3, please hurry! lol

Wow, again! This was really good aswell. I wanna know what happens now. Tehe. A great write, indeed. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Loved it keep it up your a good writer ill keep reading if you keep writing lol
:):):)

plz vote on some of my poems and let me know what you think thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)

Lol this is a very long poem like your other 2 that i have readi h ave been reading them back wards lol wow what a crazi girl they are really good tho :):):)

I liked the first part a lot.. But now it's getting really good..
I love it!

Can't wait for the next part...it keeps on wanting me to read more and more...lol..but this was nicely written!5/5

Much Love
A.Pathetic.Mistake