Loved it keep it up your a good writer ill keep reading if you keep writing lol
:):):)

plz vote on some of my poems and let me know what you think thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)

This was a joy to read, as all of yours are. I loved the flow. Keep up the great work. Timothy r

Ohh! i want to hear this as a lullaby : D

Wow...I'm loving that last line. Very poignant and so enchanting.
Lovely piece of goodness....keep it up!
Love ya~Holly

Oh yeah you do have a typo in the last stanza first line:

"So let me linger her beside"

Should be So let me linger here beside. Just letting you know...Holly