Aww I thought the poem was cute.. I love 'together apart' think you should have kept it going without dissing it tho lol.. I thought it was really sweet.. am going to give you 5/5 but that isn't for the last lines of it, thats for the rest ;) xx

Wow...great poem....and the words together/apart were perfect..they make much sence to me for i am in sum what of the same situation..i live in america and my love is in england.....but anyway the words you used were perfect and described it all well...great poem keep up the good work