I really enjoyed this poem. Great job. Keep up the good work. 5/5

That is super cute i loved it nice work

That was great "Naked between the ground and the sky" best line

i g2g but ill read the rest l8a bye

I like that

Wow.. such emotion and depth. I loved this piece of work, it was amazing! Nicely done.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.5/5

Nice poem with deep emotion,
great job 5/5
I enjoyed reading it,

Loved the poem... if I may suggest, to add more impact to the poem, seperate the lines into verses and be bold in utilizing breaks to stress the sense of longing and despair. What I mean is this...

"And the hands are just holding,
Holding...
Kissing my neck,
My lips,
My ear...
And the breath...
So sweet,
So slow..."

Same thing can be done throughout the poem to add more punch to the poem. Personal opinion though; otherwise, great write. 5/5

I loved you, I loved you deep
I loved the love you could forever keep
And today I am here you are there
That just seems for our love to be unfair
Aww! I really liked ur poem.. i thought it was very cute and sad at the same time. You are an amazing poet!

Poem was beuatiful and passionate good job... comment on mines thanks