Oooh this made me miss my sisters so much and so funny too Luanne because I just posted a kind of similar poem about my baby brothers birthday! I really loved this piece, it coveys a strong kinship and is a beautiful dedication to your sister and the special times you once, and continue to share...

Gosh Dang it Luanne...You make me jealous..I want a big sister!!!!!!!!! I mean I got Eirisa..But I want to have those memories :-(...*cries in the corner*..aside from my jealousy lol..LOVED this poem....so precious! Its awesome you still think of your big sister this way! I hope you show her this....it'll show that your always there for her and you haven't forgotten the memories..funny..you say you have a bad memory?! Love you!
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This was really a beautiful birthday gift Luanne, I loved the flow and everything fit perfectly. I am a true fan of your work, a pure joy to read. Timothy r

Luanne, This was really a good Write. The flow was perfection. The imagery without fault. It's so nice to look back on memories and relate them with such fondness. I envy that relationship with your sister. You can tell by the heart put into this piece that you and your sister share a very special bond. Hold onto that with every thing you have.