Comments : Im losing grip

  • 17 years ago

    by Jdawg

    I love it. I think one day you will be famous for all your poems.

    *~* Jennifer Dawn *~*

  • 16 years ago

    by Evil One

    Nice poem and keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    For being a short poem it had a lot of powerful emotions I think that was the best. You expressed them very well Plot121