Hey !!!
I'm really sorry but if I want to give you an honest opinion
I don't want you to get hurt or something but I really think that you should check your grammar cause there are some grammar mistakes
and another thing .. you should be more specific in your writing .. cause some things just don't make sence ..
and dont consentrate on the rhyming just write something that comes out from your heart !!!!
I'm sorry again but I felt that I should tell you!!!!!!
take care
peace

That was kinda a querky wee thing :)

This confused me as well.
I think if you would spell out your words instead of -u- or -2- then it would make a little bit more sense. Good job though.

Wow noha, I loved this poem, it was really encouarging and a full of hope poem.
well done 5\5.