Ur spelling and words are off, so it makes it hard to read. but its a great poem besides that...its hard to tell who u r talking to...u say "you" and "her" so i cant really tell...good job tho and i feel special to be on uir favorites. yay me!
love ya lots,
sore

Awesome poem. Very well written and full of emotion. Great job!! Anyways, I'll shut up now and give you 5/5 =]
Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

This was good.. the emotion you feel is loud and clear.. the flow and rhymes are a bit awkward though.. nice job! 4/5

I really like that poem and wen i was reading it i could relate it too a frined i used to have and yea its got a great flow.

It was okay, nice. I think there were a few mistakes made in the piece though.

Brad