WOW, WE DID GOOD! w00p, w00p!
I loved it, I loved it! :] hehe. I helped write it OF COURSE I LOVED IT JEEZ! LMAO!
LOVEYOUMORE!
Love,
Heather x Emo With Megan

My heart turning black without your hand to hold it close
((My heart's))

A nice gentle poem...I'm not sure what to say.. It was rather sad, but a nice write.. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex

Megan-- This was WOW. Great vocab used in this piece. I loved it. Your flow was pretty good too, Though if you wanted you could take a word or two out of each line, and it might help it look more stuctured. But that doesn't really matter. It was still a great poem. Nicely written! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``