Comments : THINKING

  • 13 years ago

    by mrhope

    I REALLY LIKE SOME COMMENT ON MY FIRST POEM.

  • 13 years ago

    by donna

    Aww I think it is a good poem.. what's stopping You from playing.. just cause you're getting older doesn't mean You have to stop having fun 5/5 xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie

    Im 26, is that so old?

    [[Try and spell the numbers out.]]

    Even though the poem was short, I liked it. You got to the point, and I'm sure there's alot of people who can relate also. Pretty good job. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

  • 13 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    I can relate i guess but not completely on account of the fact that im only 15 hehe but yeah...
    i really liked this poem
    very short but i loved it anyways
    you should go out and play just because you're getting old doesnt mean you have to stop having fun!!
    fivers for this poem
    ~Haze

  • 13 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    God I'm depressed now - it was a while since I was 26 lol.
    I loved this poem and yes I feel like that too - especially as I watch my kids and see how fast they grow.
    Looking forward to more of your work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. that was excellent hun! the descriptions and flow were great.. the emotion was loud and clear.. nice job! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by awww

    Awww... its ok to miss being young... if you said it passed so fast... then that just meant you had fun! lol! time flies when you're having fun! keep writing!

    ~angel~

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A great poem, I like the idea.

  • 13 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    WOW! It was short and I usually don't like short poems
    but this was actually really good.
    The flow and rhyming was perfect!
    sorry I have no advice:(
    but there is none to give hehe

  • 13 years ago

    by blueknight

    Yeah this is a great poem short but complete and the feelings are there the flow and rhyme are great and the words you use was so vivid great piece hope to read some of your work soon and ohh welcome to the club

    enjoy your self of being here

    Geneross

  • 13 years ago

    by Kyra

    Hey this is short but really heartfelt. An enjoyable read.
    ~Kyra~

  • 13 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    Hmm i like this poem, wish I could get to the top rated =( im happy for you. your talent proves why your on the top rated. maybe you could read mine sometime. i love to read adn write poems. i know how much comments mean to me hope you take this one to heart. i lvoed your poem very much. im only fourteen and reading that you may think twenty six is old -.- ya. ok well comment on mine sometime ---Meg

  • 13 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    WOW!!this poem is great! even tho its short its still very good! i love the idea of this one...i can't relate seeing as im only 13 but i think i wud feel that way too when i get older...anyway loving your poem hun!
    And Looking forward to some more great stuff from yoU!
    Take Care
    And
    Keep Smiling

    Much Love
    A.Pathetic.Mistake

  • 13 years ago

    by June

    I think every1 feels this way at some point in their lifes.I am somewhat older and at times I do wonder where the times all gone but age is just a figure and it's true that ur only as old as u feel.

  • 12 years ago

    by Erin

    Your not the old first off n if u think time goes by so fast then stop wasting it on here go party with ur friends go to a concert or club.

    by the way great poem 5/5