Wow you were right i really can relate to most of your stuff its really good and heartfelt this was the part that i loved the most about this one though:

if i had but one day to live
i dream to spend it in your arms
make up for a year of lies
i told myself time and time again

not too predictable but it was something that i have thought about a lot and also would do

thanks for the comment on mine!

I really like this poem. + The title is exactly what many people are feeling, I think . Thank you very much for your comment ! Respect

I loved it and i can relate to it so bad its not even funny. your a good writer

Hi Erica!! This poem is very cute and very well written!You seem to love writing just like me and you have lots of talent.I'm just new to this website so if you could check out my poems...I have been wriiting for along time and these 2 are too of my favourites!L8er g8er

Luv it!!! totally!! ;)
hope ya can drop by sumtym and read mypoems...=)

Em-as alway you got my vote a perfect -5- Lylas

Not one of your best? are you kidding me? believe me i have read hundreds of poems and by far yours are the most romantic, honest, insightful i have ever seen a guy write! your amzing, i love your work.
XOXOX
Kamille
P.S. come check out some of my poems.

Sorry i called you a guy:( oops! im kinda blonde! i thought your name was Eric! lol sorry bout that.

GOOD POEM;; THANKS FOR THE COMMENT;; KEEP iT UP

-SHELBY-

I love this poem.
great job.... i can really relate to it...