Aww, its cute and deep. Very well written. Your a talented writer. 5/5
Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

Wow. Sad. Lovely poem.

Knives are stabbing me in the heart as you are with her everyday,
watching you be so in love with her
hurts me in every way.

The ending was so good. Excellent :]

N-G-C-S.

I had the same problem with my ex but u will get over him soon br strong and hold ur head up high

THIS IS A CUTE POEM AND I CAN RELATE
WOW YOU ARE ONLY 14 AND YOU WRITE LIKE A PROFESSIONAL

Wow im going tho this rite now...n yeahh guys are jerks