I love how you are soo good at ryhming and it makes since! This poem sounds very sad but i really like it! But when someone tells you they love you it changes everything it makes you feel like someone actually does care and then you open up your heart to them and then they just rip it out the first chance they get! Thats what comes to my mind when i read this poem!

And here we go again. ANOTHER amazingly written poem by David. I love this poem so much. You have an amazing passion for poetry and I commend you for that. You have a way to rhyme and keep the poem running smoothly. Wonderful!

Love Always
~Casey J