Awwww.. that was so sweet, you must be a great friend! the flow worked well, as did your rhymes.. it was filled with emotion and the descriptions were good..nice job! 5/5

Pretty good hunni! actually very good! looks like im not the only poet in th family! lol! just one thing, i wouldve ended it a bit differently! but its up to you wether my opinion matters! lol again! well done gawjuz!
mwahmwah!
love from shae-natasha gilliland!

xoxo

Bravo. you are 13? wow. there is some talent in the house. i love our poetry, its beautiful