Comments : Can you see it in my eyes?

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, thanks for your comment on my poem! love this poem! good work with your rhime scheme, it gave me goosebumps!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi Elisa how r you? can you do me a big favour please? i need some voters so will you plz rate all my poems? thanxa bunch!

  • 17 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    This is a really good poem, one of your best ones
    and thanx for the comment
    but all i can say to answer your question is that im over it now and that poem helped release everything
    but great poem
    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by adam

    Hey hun, glad ur ok babes i was a little worried about you, time is a great healer and it makes me smile to think that ur not hurting anymore. u deserve so much more than he could give u. and i hope one day u find it. im always hear if u wana talk xxxxxxxxx my email is ajm_1980@yahoo.co.uk take care hun :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really love this poem especially the final stanza ended it nicely and showed the true meaning excellent poem hun 5/5 thanks for to comments to keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Briana

    It was quite an enjoyable read to say the least. :)