Hey hey beautiful one! *grins* did ya miss me?! lol I signed on and there was a poem by the lovely poetvoices and AS ALWAYS it was a pleasure to read. even though it didn't stick to the confinds of normal poetry that my dear is the apitamy (yea ok watever I know I can't spell! :P) of creativity... when you pull if off... which you DID! lol... in short... love ya... missed ya... JESUS LOVES YOU!

*hugs*

Ruthie xoxo

This reminds me of my poem titles sleep but more at "peace" and less worrysome ect. This is the happy version

all the things your mind can think of and do on the edge of sleep.

I like the form going from short lines to loooonnngger and then back to short

I personally think people shouldn't stick to the stigma that all stanzas have to be 4 lines long and the same length
I love mixing it up and going against those "rules" as you well know

I like this poem, hopefully I'll have a night before I go to sleep like that, maybe different music but none the less the same

beautiful poem

:-)

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