Wow i usualy write poems that rhyme alot cuzz those are generally the only kind i like but u did a great job on this poem and even though it doesnt rhyme too much i still really liked it good job

Oh YES! Mr. Busch needs some critisism in this world! =P I like the questions in this. They really make the poem all it is. The flow was better in some parts, than others, and I really like the topic you chose. Busch needs to get out of the President's chair and never return. =P Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I really enjoyed reading this poem.. I loved the way it was different to most poems I read on here, I loved the flow and the wording.. excellent poem 5/5 xx

Great poem I like it :)

Lol i wouldve expected this more from an american! it was a good poem, i loved it. but the swearing shocked me, maybe replace it with something less obscene? the overall writing was well done.

Oh my. This was really good. I loved the message in this. It was so good, hun. Nice flow too. Lovely piece. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

WOW!!!!

I LOVE IT

Nice account to your president. Good poem, I liked reading it. Look through my poem: oxygen of reign. Its difficult but it is, what the truth of our leaders will do to me and other hopeless intellectuals.

GREAT! 5/5....A++++

I'm not sure I understand the meaning 100%, but I like what I do understand lol.

typo-- in fourth stanza "your" should be "you're"

I love the ending though!

5/5

WOW! This is one of my favourite of yours so far, it was very powerful and filled with meaning. I liked it alot. 5/5

I really liked this poem. The last stanza is the best, its very true. And the unnecessary war thing, i really liked that. A great poem! Keep it up! xx

Hmmm, in your poems i can realize, either you hate politics or you are so close to politics.
great poem ance again, you make your readers think about the reality of this life taht we share.

I really enjoyed this...so many questions that it provokes...
The ending, as always, was fantastic.
The flow is flawless throughout, the imagery beautifully done and the wording such a pleasure to read.

I really liked this poem and the message you were trying to get across with it. It is so true. Great job 5/5

Really really great.. 5/5
lol.. you should send this to the inconsiderate, power-driven, heartless SOB. <3 .. im sure he would enjoy it. =) i did.