WHOA! that poem is a BOMB it like blew me away..lol! but yeh its very good...The flow great flow, great description but i loved ending the most...and yeh its a PERFECT love poem! 5/5

Keep It Up
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
Tormented

Awww...another sad....poem thingy mabober...lol...im kidding...me likey aloty.....lol....anyways...K.U.T.G.W(keep up the good work)

This is beautifully written, you have so much talent!!
Much love goin out to ya,

Kato