THIS...IS....SO.....GOOD
i love it everything
i know wat it is like to be turned down by your father
this poem is so awsome
5/5 actually 100/100
=)

This is a dark poem, but very well written. sorry to hear about the relationship with you father, but you'll win in the end.

keep on rocking!

I really like this
i can relate about the whole father thing
5/5
great job again

It always been about you

[ Maybe add the the 'has' after 'it' ..or just say "it's" ]

never think of anyone else

[ Thinking might work better. ]

cause your never ever home

[ You're not your. ]

This was a really sad poem, and I hope it's not based on anything true. The emotions in this were raw and I loved it. A great job! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!

I can really relate to wat this poem means
5/5
keep it up

I got probs with my dad too.. he lives in darwin, i like in qld... but yer i sorta can relate... my parents arent bad people, just bad parents... try n think of it like that? im sure hes not trying to hurt you intentionally... unless hes like sadistic.. then he should be locked up...