That was amazing! Breathtaking! WOW!
LoveYOUSOMUCH!
Love,
..::Heather x Emo With Megan::..

This was good.. in some parts i felt that you used extra words that were not needed.. the descriptions were nice though, it flowed well, and contained a lot of emotion.. nice job hun! 5/5

Very Scrooge like poem, but I wish it would have had more flow. But it was most excellent written. Good job.

xDarksuicidex 5.5

Thats a nice poem! loved this part

""I shake, wanting this to be over.
I pray for it to be a dream.
A nightmare that is ending.
I close my eyes quickly."

Keep it up!!! always :D