Kewl poem dude keep up da good work...!!

Ur poem brought tears to my eyes.. 5/5. its beautiful.. but its also really sad at the same time... and it is true and i imagine it being that way for alot of ppl. ur poem is wonderful keep it up..

Dear Sreeram

What a tragically beautiful piece you have here. It seems to say so much about what you are going through, but I do like the optimism you have ended it with. Hold on tight, for faith itself is a miracle. And it is enough to see you through.

thank you very much for your comments on my work. I really appreciate it.

Keep writing. You have immense talent.

Good luck and peace to you

shobhana

Wow...i liked it...i dont usually like long poems but i did this one i like *** Bound to this chain,
I'm crying in pain,
My head starts spinning,
and i see lucifer winning.
***
a lot..keep up the good work
Oxo Laura Marie aka Sweets

I adore! love! very very very well done sir

Wow!!! amazingly great and depressing but so talented i love it keep the great writng up
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