Comments : Russian Roulette of the Heart

  • 17 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    Good poem ... I can understand the way you feel, maybe because I recognize it.. I like this one

  • 17 years ago

    by JamesP

    I can't help but wonder who these are about. good job by the way

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    This is a great piece with some very strong emotion. I really like the flow, though there is one bit I think you could change a little just to finalise the wonderful flow...

    **I don't know exactly
    **What sets you apart
    All I know is that you're playing
    Russian Roulette with my heart

    ** The two lines above I think you could rearrange to flow a little better with the poem. For example:

    I don't know what exactly
    Is setting you apart

    It's just a suggestion and you may not agree. I really like this piece and the way it is being told.

  • 17 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    And thanks for you comment on my poem ... xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by doXyouXeverXwonder

    Wow...this is great. reminds me of my stuff actually...and nobody has ever done that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Anthony

    Amazing. I really love this poem. I hate going through that with people. Thats why i stopped having to buy bullets for my heart. Great write. 5/5

    ~^_^Anthony^_^~