Ooooo.... I like it ; )

Darn, you are so good. I have to admire anyone that can get such a powerful message across in just 3 lines. Well done

Holly, this is absolutely perfect! I adore this and the wording is stunning, awesome senryu!

That was great, thax for commenting.

Superb example of a Senryu Poem.
Definitely one of my favorites..

God Bless!

Hey! i finally got a little bit of time to be on the site. i hope things are going well i wish i could be on to help out more.

beautiful poem, you have so much power and meaning within this and you expressed it beautifully!

~Jacklyn

Great example of a Senyru!

I Like It!!

5.5**
<3

Lovely form of poetry.. n I read quite a few senryu's over here.. n tis one.. who could have missed... good

Keep it up

Karan