Oh. I've seen poems like this before. The others I have seen aren't or weren't really good, or made no sense. I love this one though. I liked how it actually flows and made sense. It was very nicely written as usual. Great Job Hun.

Thanks for explaining it. I was kinda at a loss as to why every line started with a 'T' lol. Anyway, great poem! I really enjoyed reading it.

I loved the alliteration! good job!

Wow...Really good...I don't know what to say. Flow was good, and rhymes were well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I don't really agree with the message you wrote about here but I do like how you made it into a story and not just random words thrown together.

I dont know where do you get this form but then it is awesome nice job it is hard to write and the lines are powerful i like the way you write

Geneross

Aw, that was great! You really do love angels don't you? Lol.. This flowed well and followed all the rules.. Nice job 5/5

Ooh, wowee. This was really cool. I've tried this style before {on my other account} and I actually found it really hard, but the way you've written this, you've made it look so easy. Wonderful job! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Hmm, I thought this was an interesting piece, I'm not sure where the role of 'theism' is played in this. Angels really have nothing to do with "Theism" unless your religion was Catholicism. "Theism" Is basically any religion that believes in a God. Hmm, interesting style as well.

Hey cool i didnt know that poems could be written like that but yea cool i liked it alot.
~Kyra~

Wow.. That was absolutely amazing. I've never heard of that type of poem before, but you did a great job on this. The flow of it was really good, and the whole poem in general was very different. The last line gave me chills for some reason. Great job on this! 5/5

That was an amazing {Pleiades}. I have never heard of one before but it really captured me.
This is where angels burn. was my favorite line, im off to read more!

Cool poem

Love it, very deep and powerful poem. Great job adding angels in.