Very good but very sad why cant people ever look at someone for who they are not there past

GREAT POEM!! WOOP, WOOP!
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Oooh. wowee, Megan-- This was great. I've tried one of these and I actually found it pretty tricky, tehe. Loved the words you chose for this. Excellently written. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Very nicely done... I've written one and know it's kind of hard to do, but you did it wonderfully. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

"flocking round"
['around'? or 'round'? I dunno, 'around' sounded like it fit better]

Woot! Nice first attempt, you did a great job. I'm not very good at formed poetry either. Good job though, you've got more guts than me in trying.

Awhh, taht was so sadd. I loved the voacaublary you used in this, it was great. The flow worked well and I liked the form. Nice job 5/5