Awww that is soo sad.. wow that makes me wana cry.. but u wrote this very well. i love how u wrote it like it was a story. u should be very proud of this. its amazing. i lvoe this story..
take care hun
luve angie

WOW! -- Meg

Mel,
This is so sad. but i love the emotion. Great work

Wow.. ohmy. I loved this story, it was very good. I can't believe that happened, it's so sad. =ll.

AWW ..!!

that brang tears to my eyes,
you should be very peround lol ..!!

EFFIN AWESOME ..!! AND ADORABLE ..!!

That was great...and very sad. you have the right to be proud about it.

+.+ You should be proud of this ONE!! I would be!! +.+

Wow this is really touching i luv it