You have a very unique style of writing. something about them, is just. wow..but i loved this one. good job 5/5

Wow.. I don't even know what to say but.. wow. You are a fantastic writer. Keep it up!

This is a great poem, but i don't really understand what you are talking about.
it might just be me, but i don't know. it confuses me. well great job on writing it! 5/5

Wow! You used some very strong deep words. You gave a wonderful description of words. I loved both stanzas because they both held deep emotion. Another great poem.

5/5

Letty