Hey darl a very touching piece. great use of words. thank u for ur comment on my poems meant alot!!! =) xx

I love it, especially how you built up the whole "world" thing, and then at the end you say that she's your world. :) Cute. 5/5

Wow this is really very nicely written, great write indeed

all the best and take care

Aaww that's beautiful... this girl is SSOO lucky! I wish a guy would write me a poem like that

Hey chick, u rated & said something about 1 of my poems so had 2 come look at ur owkr, its lovly. the rest aint my cup of tea what i seen so far