Hmmm...interesting take....thats a rihanna song's take off isnt it?
not quite sure if i like it or not
but its an interesting aspect
kat - xox

The first 2 lines are rihanna's cause my friend kept singing it over and over...lol! but i kinda expressed the rest from what im feeling...get it?

Jj! yeh, i was bored so i decided to change the words but keep the tune...
and i know why you dont like it! like i said i was bored, so my poem was gonna turn out crap...it is not like my other poems so dont be turned off by this one, ok?