Aw wow Jessy. That was really sad! So good though. You're improving so much you know. Loved this poem. Great flow and vocab. It was fantastic! Keep it up hun. Ily. 5/5

Natalie``

This is a really touching piece. I feel I can rerlate somewhat, but not the losing a sibling part. But I know how it feels to lose someone and I hate it. I like how you called it a 'ruby rose' and not the cliche scarlet or crimson, or evne red lol. Ruby is very clever. Keep it up!

Sad, yet very calm poem. Great imagery and descriptions

Hey jess!

great poem.

i loved the lines

"a jigsaw missing a piece"

"a king without a golden thrown"

excelllent work keep it up.

sophie:)

Nice imagination in this poem, I really like it and enjoyed reading it, great job and i'm giving it a 5/5 not anything less than that,lol
but it deserve more though

So sad... oh sad... awesome... but still sad. lol 5/5

Awh, nicely written Jessy, I was really sad. I thought the flow was wonderful. Great Job as usual. :]

Aww. It's so sad. And filled with emotion. I love it! Great flow and terrific vocab chosen out. =) Keep it up hun! 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Aww that's a very sweet poem... A lot different from the rest you read and I like that. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This was truly a heartwarming picture and tribute to a brother loved. I can so relate to it because I, myself, have lost a brother. Like you, it took a long time to heal. Thank you for a beautiful write.

Aweee, is this true?? If it is, I'm soo sorry about your loss. Nice job on the poem! Once again it flowed beautifully. Keep it up!

Wow i liked it very much... u knew how to express ur feelings in a good poetic way

All i can say is excellint nothing else...will keep writing such a very nice poems of you...

Im so sorry for your loss

GREAT poem

xx

Your poem.. i dont even know how to explain it.. but it is really good!!! keep up the good work!

Im so speachless.
I don't even have a favorite line or stanza because to me the whole poem was brilliant. And every single word just made it flow and fit together so wonderfully.

I loved it.
I wish i could write something this good.

-Amberinaa*

I cryed when i read this it is so sad

...its beautiful... I lost 5 of my best friends in a car crash lastyear and they were all so close to me like family, i mean litteraly we have drow up on the same street since we werelike 5 and been best friends untill such time, and then they all were gone, all at one time... one of witch was a mother, and its so hard to loose friends, i know... and in this case or atleast as the poem goes a brother... so yeah, this one really connected to me, and i think it is beautioful... do nto stop writeing...
-Marina