Good poem. You may want to put it into stanzas, it makes the poem easier to read and more appealing.

Awh, I loved the last line! It was awesome.. The flow in this was a little bumpy but pretty much okay.. The descriptions were also pretty good.. Nice job hun 5/5

Wow this is really good. I loved the title i think it just said it all. Keep up the good work! 5/5

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This is one of the most splendid poem i have read today. it was beautifully written and filled with broken hearts and tears. good poem.

-Sarah A.