Awesome! I loved how you compared love to a pen! That amazing!! Beautiful poem, I like your style of writing, its different and thats good to read every now and then!
_Krissey

P.S would love your feedback on "The ship pulled into shore"

Hahahha you read this to me on the phone!!!! Gotta say, it was pretty darn beautiful. Made me jealous. Ho. lol love you!

Ink wells run deep
thanks for the comment on "feeling you" i wrote another leaf or oak let me know what you think. i'm getting ready to read more of yours now. Good luck and keep inspiring.