Awww that is so sad! A beautifully written poem but a terribly sad story! I'm so sorry about all that...not much I can say or do so I'll just stick with complimenting your poem! This was awesome! Nice write!
-Krissey

P.S would love your feedback on "The ship pulled into shore"

Wow, love, that was incredible and also very sad. That kind of heartfelt stuff just makes me appriciate you even more. I'm going to miss you, you know. :(

Car